"A good friend will bail you out of jail....a true friend will be sitting next to you saying 'Damn we fucked up!'"
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lianca |
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I'm beginning a new story hope to be longer than my last the title came from that song "When a man loves a woman" but it will be about Lena and Bianca they'll just be college students who meet in Pennsylvania...the first chapter won't be far behind this post
"Shall I abide in this dull world which in her absence is no better than a sty?"
"A good friend will bail you out of jail....a true friend will be sitting next to you saying 'Damn we fucked up!'" |
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shyone |
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A new story
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vannie2 |
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Yay!!!! Always look forward to new stories!!!
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imlovinit |
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I second that emotion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hubfox |
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Me too.
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lianca |
When a Woman Loves a Woman..Chapter 1 | ||
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When a Woman Loves a Woman
Disclaimers: Um as you know ABC owns most of these characters (except for a few of my very own) I'm just borrowing them for awhile...and this is my 2nd fanfic but i'm still not sure if it'll be good or not so bear with me i'll do my best I promise Characters/Pairings: Bianca/Lena Maggie/Max Kendall/Zach Ratings I have to thank Kelly for the bit of help she inspired me with her newfound lovelife which i'm insanely jealous of But i'm glad Kelly that you did finally find someone and that your mother has finally come to terms with everything! This is for you and Tara The first chapter is a bit short i'm sorry but the others will be longer hope you all enjoy Chapter 1: First Meeting                                 It just so happen that her 18th birthday fell on graduation day, thus Bianca Montgomery was a very happy 18 year old. She decided what a better way to celebrate both at the same then to go to the club she'd been dying to get into for a night. The Blue Angel.                 Her best friend Maggie Stone would also be coming with her. Her mother had always hated Maggie she thought that was the reason that Bianca was gay.Of course she had had conflicting emotions before Maggie had come into town. When Maggie had first come to Pine Valley she had no problem with letting everyone know she was gay and flirted with Bianca and once just once was all it took, Maggie kissed Bianca and Bianca knew. She knew why she was so conflicted she knew why she never wanted JR or Jamie to kiss her she was waiting for a girls soft lips to caress her own.                 "Bianca are you almost ready?" Maggie asked hand on hip                 "Almost" Bianca replied throwing another shirt on the pile growing on her bed                 "Binx" she shook her head "look where this and this" she said holding up a low v-neck cut tank and a short black skirt.                 "Are you sure?"                 "Yes Binx now hurry I want to be out there as long as I can be and I'll leave your ass here soon so hurry up!"                 "OK ok i'm going!!!" she said going into the bathroom                 15 minutes later she came out dressed and made up nice her short brown hair down but nice "I look ok?"                 "Your hot B now let's go!!" Maggie said pulling her arm                 Lena Kundera was enjoying the club she had found. Her first night in town and she hit the jackpot wall to wall women. Short ones, tall one, fat ones, skinny ones.                 "I could make a song" she murumured to herself.                 And that's when she got her first glimpse of Bianca Montgomery. Work had brought her here to PIne Valley but maybe a good chase would keep her here.                 She thought it wierd that people parted like the red sea as the new arrival walked towards the bar and all eyes were on her.                 "Who is she?" she asked the bartender                 "Bianca Montgomery she's Erica Kane's youngest daughter"                 "Oh"                 Of course she had heard of the infamous Erica Kane and her company Enchantment but not much of her daughter Bianca. There had been a big story of the older Kane girl Kendall Hart but not much about Bianca.                                 "God Maggie this sucks I just wanted one night of being an ordinary 18 year old girl"                 "Your Erica Kane's daughter Bianca what'd you expect?"                 "I guess I expected too much" she sighed                 "Come on Binx let's just dance forget all the people your hear to have a good time and that's what were going to do" Maggie said heading towards the dancefloor                 "I'll be out there in just a minute kay"                 "Alright meet you out there"                 She just sat a moment to just look around to let it sink in she was 18 she was finally free she was moving out in the next couple of weeks, she had a part-time job, and would be starting college in the fall, she was going to enjoy the summer to the fullest.                 "Pardon me" she felt a tap on her shoulder                 "Yes" she turned to see deep brown eyes well rake over her a moment                 "I was wondering could I order you a drink?"                 "No thank you I don't drink but thanks for the offer"                 "Well then no drink then how bout a dance?"                 She saw Maggie with a group of girls                 "I'd love to" she said                 "Lena Kundera" the woman said holding out her hand                 "Bianca Montgomery"                 "Well Bianca i'm delighted to meet you, shall we"                 "Yes"                 And they headed off to the floor "Shall I abide in this dull world which in her absence is no better than a sty?"
"A good friend will bail you out of jail....a true friend will be sitting next to you saying 'Damn we fucked up!'" |
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AKAMimster |
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lianca, A very nice beginning. Look forward to future upates.
The gull sees farthest who flies highest. Johathan Livingston Seagull, a story by Richard Bach |
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KellyJo87 |
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AWwww Lynnie thank you!
This one's better than that one you tore up. It's a great start can't wait for the rest "Jolene, Jolene, Jolene, Jolene
I'm begging of you, please don't take my man Jolene, Jolene, Jolene, Jolene Please don't take him just because you can" Mindy Smith "Isn't it crazy how slayin' just always makes you hungry and horny?" Eliza Dushku as Faith the Vampire Slayer |
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shyone |
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Nice start cant wait to see whats going to happen next
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HeartAFire |
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Great beginning. I'm already hooked. I'm so looking forward to your next update.
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Sandy |
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Looking forward to more
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mujer de fuego |
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Love your story, can't wait for more...
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liancafan |
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great start and looking forward to the next update![]() Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Unknown |
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lianca |
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                I want to change a little about the story after a discussion with Kelly we decided that Lena will not be in college she's 28 and going to start her own company in Pine Valley..competing against the Great Erica Kane
Chapter 2: To Kiss or Not To Kiss                         They fell into an easy rhythm their body's swaying together, pressed close, Lena's front to Bianca's back. They hadn't spoken at all until Lena finally asked                 "What brings you here tonight"                 "Well today was graduation and my 18th birthday"                 "Ahh well happy birthday and congratulations on graduating"                 "Thank you" Bianca replied "Where are you from"                 "Why do you ask"                 "Your accent" 'is sexy' she wanted to add                 "My parents were Polish"                 "Oh wow so what brings you here"                 "Work and some freedom" she said smiling sweetly at Bianca and they went back to dancing                         They sat down awhile later talking before a stumbling drunk Maggie came over                 "Hiya Binks" she slurred                 "Maggie" she shook her head                 "I'm feeling kinda woozzz B"                 "I'm sorry" Bianca said to Lena "it was nice meeting and talking to you but I need to get her home"                 "Of course" Lena said standing "here i'll help walk her out"                 "You do-"                 "I know but I don't mind"                 "Thanks"                 They managed to get Maggie into the car no trouble and she automatically went to sleep.                 "Well thank you very much"                 "It was no trouble really"                 "It was very nice dancing with you"                 "It was my pleasure" Lena said moving a bit closer to Bianca their breast pressing.                 Bianca's heart picked up her breath quickened as Lena's face moved closer to hers, her lips moving in and then a car sped by and Bianca jumped                 "It's ok Bianca" Bianca nodded "Perhaps we'll see each other again"                 "I think we will" Bianca said tucking a piece of hair behind her ear                 "Then this is goodnight"                 "Yes goodnight"                 "Goodnight" Lena kissed Bianca's cheek                 "Goodnight" Bianca whispered as Lena walked slowly away                 3 days later Bianca was still thinking about Lena. Her eyes, voice, the way she danced, her lips....she was still wondering what would've happened if they had kissed. Probably nothing she guessed Lena looked older more mature. It still didn't stop her from daydreaming about it. She sighed and put her head down on her desk she'd probably never see Lena again.                                 "Ms. Kundera it's been a pleasure doing buisness with you" the fat bald man said shaking her hand                 "You too Mr. Taylor thank you for everything"                 "Your welcome here's the keys to the building"                 Lena took the keys and looked up at the 5 story building that would soon be Kundera Enterprises. She was going to make something of herself here in Pine Valley and maybe just maybe she would make it home.                 "Lena" a soft voice came to her ears, she turned to see Bianca standing there                 "Oh Bianca, Hi" she said waving her over                 "Hello again how are you"                 "Lovely how are you doing today?"                 "Fine just getting off to work"                 "Where do you work?"                 "For my mother at Enchantment"                 "Oh Erica Kane is your mother" she said playing dumb                 "Yes, everyone says I'm only working for her because she is my mother and i'll one day inherit the company but I really just want experience so one day I can start my own buisness"                 "That's very ambitious"                 "Thank you" she smiled softly "so what are you doing here?"                 "Well I just finshed buying this building"                 "What are you doing with it?"                 "Starting my own company"                 "Does that mean my mother have competition?"                 "Well we'll see when it gets up and running"                 "Well I wish you the best of luck"                 "Even if I am competition"                 "Hey a little healthy competition never hurt anyone"                 Lena gave a little laugh "Well thank you"                 "No problem" Bianca looked at her watch "well I have to go but um hey if we run into each other again want to get a coffee or something?"                 "I would love to"                 "Ok well bye"                 "Bye have a good day"                 "You too"                 And Lena watched her walk down the street and around the corner. She looked up where you could see the Enchantment sign and then looked at her own building 'I think that yes this will be home'                 "Shall I abide in this dull world which in her absence is no better than a sty?"
"A good friend will bail you out of jail....a true friend will be sitting next to you saying 'Damn we fucked up!'" |
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shyone |
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hmmm alittle friendly competion....
....great update
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HeartAFire |
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Awesome update. I'm so luvin' this story. Can't hardly wait for your next update.
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imlovinit |
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Bianca may think competition is healthy, but Erica will certainly not and will not be thrilled when she finds out Bianca is friends with the enemy. Love the story Keep it coming.
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sade1 |
Update | ||
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lianca |
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Sorry it's been so long but i'm thinking by saturday or sunday I should have an update...
Coming up next...a possible first date!! "Shall I abide in this dull world which in her absence is no better than a sty?"
"A good friend will bail you out of jail....a true friend will be sitting next to you saying 'Damn we fucked up!'" |
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shyone |
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cant wait for part 3
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lianca |
When a Woman Loves a Woman..chap 3 | ||
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I was done early than I thought so enjoy and thanks for all the comments!                
Chapter 3: First Date                                 As she walked up the stairs with a box of things Bianca couldn't help but smile she was finally moving into her own apartment, no more worrying about her mother asking where she was going and when she was going to be home. She had her own place now she could come and go as she pleased.                 "Looking good B" Maggie said looking at the pile of boxes                 "I know it's not alot of stuff but hey it's a start"                 There was a small knock at the opened door and there stood Lena Kundera in all her glory with a small bag in hand. "Hello"                 "Hi Lena"                 "I saw you earlier so I figured i'd get you a little something for your new place."                 "Thank you" Bianca said taking the bag and opening it to see a set of kitchen towels and pot holders. "You know it's funny this is one thing I didn't pick up" she said with a chuckle                 "Well I'm glad I could be of some service"                 "Thank you so much"                 "It was no trouble"                 "Would you like to come in we're going to take a small break"                 "I don't want to intrude on you and your friend"                 "OH!" Bianca had forgotten all about Maggie "I'm so sorry Lena this is my best friend Maggie Stone"                 "Hi nice to meet you"                 "I believe we've met"                 "Yes I know but I didn't know who you were or even how to speak so.."                 "It is nice to meet the sober you" they all let out a small laugh "but I really must be going Bianca I have some work to do"                 "Well it was nice to see you again" Bianca said                 "Yes it was and we'll see each other again if you don't mind me dropping by every now and then"                 "No I don't"                 "Hey why don't we go for drinks tonight???" Maggie piped up                 "Yes we could meet at BJ's great food and great service nothing fancy but you'll love it"                 "What do you think Lena 7 ok?"                 "Yes that'll be good"                 "Just come here and we'll take you ok"                 "Ok"                 "Well see you tonight then"                 "Yes" Lena said smiling brightly at Bianca who returned it "Until later ladies" and she left                 "Wow she's hot, you been holding out on me Binks?"                 "I met her at Blue Angel and saw her a couple days ago I don't even know her yet"                 "But admit it she's hot"                 "She is" Bianca said with a grin going into the kitchen                 "Bianca's got a girlfriend, Bianca's got a girlfriend" Maggie chanted as she set up the kitchen while Bianca was busy with the movers in the living room who had gotten there just in time.                 "Shut up Maggie" Bianca growled "she's not my girlfriend"                 "Sorry Bianca you know i'm just teasing"                 "Yes but it's time to stop now" she turned back to the moving guys "thank you so much"                 "Your welcome Ms. Montgomery"                 After the movers had left Bianca took a shower while Maggie had went home to get changed.                 Bianca wore her blue jeans and white collared shirt. And then the phone rang                 "Hello"                 "Uh hey Bianca i'm not going to be able to make it tonight" Maggie said                 "Why not?"                 "Some last minute plans came up but hey have fun with Lena i'll call you tomorrow"                 "Ok bye"                 "Bye"                 At 6:50 Lena showed up in jeans and a white tank that showed off her long arms.                 "Hello again" she said with a smile                 "Hello..you look great"                 "Thank you..your not so bad yourself"                 "Well thank you"                 "Where is Maggie"                 "She's actually not coming something came up"                 "Oh"                 "But that's ok i'll try my best to show you a good time" she said getting her keys "shall we?"                 "Yes"                 BJ's was as busy as ever with music playing and people dancing on the dancefloor.                 "It's great" Lena said as they sat at a table                 "So you like it ok?"                 "Yes"                 "We could go somewhere I mean there's other places and..." she stopped feeling Lena's hand on hers                 "This is perfect Bianca I think this might be a nice place to sit back and relax"                 "Actually there's another spot for that maybe i'll show you it later"                 "That would be lovely"                 "Ok"                 With non-alcoholic drinks they chatted away learning about each other and they even danced closely.                 And then Bianca took Lena to the Boathouse.                 "Now this is where you come to relax and think" she said slipping off her shoes her toes slipping into the cool water. "come on don't be shy take your shoes off relax"                 So Lena did settling down beside Bianca "So you come here alot?"                 "No just when I want to think, you can see the 4th of July fireworks really well"                 "I'll have to come then"                 "Alright but this is my spot ok i'll be here most of the day"                 "That's ok"                 They sat there for the longest time just watching the water before Lena looked at her watch                 "Bianca"                        "Hmm"                 "I'm sorry but it's late I need.."                 "Oh i'm sorry"                 "It's ok but I need to go on to sleep"                 Slowly they made their way back to the car and then to Bianca's house where they stood beside Lena's car saying goodnight                 "I had a wonderful time"                 "I'm glad" Bianca said "well goodnight"                 "Goodnight Bianca" she opened her door "that was a wonderful first date" she kissed Bianca's cheek and slid into her car driving away                 It didn't really occur to Bianca until she was in bed settling to sleep that Lena had said 'first date'. She fell asleep with a smile on her face.                 While across town in her new place Lena sat with a drink in hand                 "Lena what are you doing?" she asked herself downing the rest of it.                 "Shall I abide in this dull world which in her absence is no better than a sty?"
"A good friend will bail you out of jail....a true friend will be sitting next to you saying 'Damn we fucked up!'" |
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